I love the harsh cold winter
So I stay wrapped up in my leather
Snuggle under my blankets in bed
And snuggle with my man
It kills all the bad
And after comes Spring
A new leaf
And a time to start again
Then Summer, the days start getting hotter
And you get out of bed with the sun earlier
The urge to go to the beach is always there
Being lazy now is always acceptable
Then comes Fall
With beautiful colours of the sunset
Lifting off for the first time
Following you in the wind
Author notes
I didnt know which Season to pick, so I did them all.
A contest entry
- Seasons! by soccer220.
475 points, ended November 12, 2007, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Judgemental - Good or Bad - comments are great!!
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sounds like a good life
Good luck in the Seasons contest -
Very nicely written. I like how you portray the four seasons from a distinct point of view. I would advise using more punctuation, but for now it is okay. Thanks for entering and good luck! Keep that pen flowing!
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Thank you
Thank you for judging me honestly.
I'll work on my punctuation.
I think I just was lazy when I wrote it!
Hehe!
Thank you
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didn't know which season to pick, so you did them all.
cute
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I thought this poem was great. Explaining each season, and why you like it. Great use of imagery.
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This is a nice poem, kind of sweet. It has been extremely windy this fall.
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So wonderful!!! All the seasons have their beauty!!! You certainly captured that!
Blessings~
Az
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Thank you
You always give me the best of comments.
Thank you
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Wonderful
Very well describe. A great creation about the seasons. Best of luck in the contest.
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Thankyou for your beautiful comment
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