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Autumn Day

I wake up each morning
Awaiting fall
I want to shout out
I want to call.

The leaves start turning brown
My eyes begin to shine
From all the wind blows
I'll call Autumn mine.

The wind calms me down
And I love when the wind blows my way
In my favorite season
I love the Autumn Day.

The breeze blows hard
My pain flows away.
I love this season
Because it's an Autumn day.

One would think I'm crazy
One would think I'm insane
I love the autumn breeze
And I'm not one to complain.

I love to play with the leaves
It has always been that way.
Even when the leaves fall in my hair
It's still going to be my Favorite Autumn Day.

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  • Chrissy03
    January 30, 2008
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    beautiful

    Fall season is beautiful.

  • soccer220
    October 30, 2007

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    Wow... this poem is great! I really like how you describe why you like fall. Thanks for entering and good luck! P.S. I also liked how your ryhmes were no forced.