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Crucify Me

He wept…
And I know why…
The sadness kept…
The hatred felt…
That’s why I cry…

God has a plan…
Did I make him mad?
Why does it differ for every man?
Life can’t be fair…
And why I’m sad…

You’re path is paved in gold…
My path is paved in thorns…
Was my life also sold…
You get fancy soles and heels…
When my sandals are worn…

You live in a car…
Driving with ease…
I have to walk so far…
In summer I sweat…
In winter I freeze…

My life is a mountain range…
I constantly go uphill…
You look at me like I’m strange…
You don’t even know my struggle…
I’m just the martyr you’re going to kill…

How do I persevere…
When my life is cursed…
You may live by fear…
But I get my strength…
Knowing I’ll get there first…

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  • kittkat2007
    March 5, 2008
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    wow.. still as amazing as ever I can see.. I miss you!


  • God is my reality
    February 2, 2008

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    Wow, you can totally feel the emotion in this, the pain the feeling of being hated and not accepted. You wonder why everyone else has it better. Beautiful write


  • TexasMomma
    December 27, 2007

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    oh this is a very beautiful and heartfelt piece...an oh what truth it brings...I absolutely loved reading this one...keep up the wonderful work my friend!


  • Loves Own Requiem
    November 25, 2007

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    "You’re path is paved in gold…
    My path is paved in thorns…" Just like Starz of Heaven I LOVE this part. AMAZING! Keep writing

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    October 30, 2007

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    Oh I like this piece.
    You’re path is paved in gold…
    My path is paved in thorns…
    Was my life also sold…
    You get fancy soles and heels…
    When my sandals are worn…

    Very good full of the descriptions and well thought out,Best wishes

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