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Visual Pain

Visual Pain

Tears drip like prisms.
Rainbows across my face.
Oceans giving life.
Flooding waters renewing.

Visual pain.

Blood drips like tears.
Crimson stains on my skin.
Oceans drowning the world.
Flooding waters tearing away.

Visual pain.

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  • God is my reality
    February 2

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    "Blood drips like tears
    Crimson stains on my skin"

    That is just pure brilliance. I love it. Yet another amazing creation. I really am feeling the soul in this poem. Excellent job. It's different in it's own way, but it catches your attention

  • only1love4ever
    November 3, 2007

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    It is distant, but yet so distinct. I like it! You did an amazing job with this poem, and hopefully you will continue to do so in the future. It is defiently original!
  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    October 30, 2007

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    Oh I like this it seems to be more of a struggle with SI Thank you for sharing this wit me.Best wishes and much love