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Just Waiting for Never

How easy would you leave?
When will it happen?
You say never…
But what if people knew?
Would you stay then?
You say forever…
What if I got mad?
Would you leave then?
You say not probable…
What if you got bored?
Would you stray away?
You say you wouldn’t be able…

I’m just waiting for forever to end…
Never has to be just around the corner…
Probability is a number…
And the odds say…
Someday…
You’ll be able…

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  • kittkat2007
    March 5, 2008
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    wow.. that was great

    I like the part about being able to leave it is soo true..


  • TexasMomma
    December 26, 2007

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    very nice write! I enjoyed reading this piece and I love the way you ended it...you are a very talented writer my friend...I look forward to reading more of your work!

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    October 30, 2007

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    This is sad it is hard to wonder all the times when someone will turn and walk away.Thanks for sahring this with me best wishes and much love