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I Find it Hard

I find it hard to tell the truth, I find it hard to speak,
I find it hard to talk to you, and yes, I know I'm weak.
I find it hard to trust in you, the concept makes me queasy -
I find it hard to do all this, yet loving you is easy.

I find it hard to believe you when you tell me "forever",
I find it hard to be certain we'll always be together.
I find it hard to know for sure that you truly love me -
I find it hard to trust, yet I know we were meant to be.

I find it hard to lose myself; to not feel apprehension,
I find it hard to give you enough love and attention.
I find it hard, when I am with you, to lose my inhibitions -
I find it hard to do this, yet I love you without condition.

I find it hard to be myself, and not put on a show,
I find it hard, when I am scared, to try and let you know.
I find it hard to let down my guard; to let you see me cry -
I find it hard to let me love you... but I will until I die!!

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  • Kiari
    May 7, 2009
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    thnx for the feedback it helps i like ur poems too buddy!


  • geckogirl
    May 5, 2009

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    wow great rhyme & flow, thanks for entering... well done. good luck


  • LakeEffectKid
    April 13, 2009

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    Thank you so much for your kind words.
    I like this a lot, it flows beautifully - very well written. The concept is so touching; feelings and emotions we can all relate to.
    xxx


  • musicofthepen
    March 13, 2009

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    Thank you very much. I love this poem. It's so touching, especially because i have felt like this with my boyfriend. Its very well written as wel


  • MaddHatter gold member
    October 20, 2008

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    You know...most repeatative rhymes become annoying..
    I think you did Swell here....nice rhyme scheme...not to mention the the pain...
    I love it.


  • my imaginary friend
    October 13, 2008

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    Oh wow! I love how well you have rymed this, it flows perfectly and is well timed. I think a lot of us can relate to this piece nice work, very well penned

  • shortyjo
    January 19, 2008

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    I like this. I like the whole theme of finding it hard but doing it anyway, like it doesn't matter it's hard because it's worth it. Very cool.


  • bedazzled
    December 10, 2007

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    beautiful as always maria. absoloutely flawless rhyming here, sometimes i just give up and make it free verse hahaha. good that you're happy
    xx


  • DenyMyLove
    October 31, 2007

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    Wow!!!! I absolutly loved reading this!!!! Maybe that's because this is exactly how I feel! Very well written!!!!
    ~DAWN~

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