snatched in barbs,
you wriggle a little;
your smile,
on parted
lips,
was such a giveaway
no one likes to be
caught:
hook;
line;
sinker...
A contest entry
- the language of fish by Cat.
500 points, ended November 1, 2007, 19 entries
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I think I have to agree with Melissa here... I like to be caught, but that depends on who's doin the catchin lol.
Nicely done.
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so many directions this poem can be taken in- i really like this to the point - well worded and phrase conservative piece-
nicely done elaine!
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oh you naughty thing you!
lol
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Loved this one - multi-layered piece of writing, Elaine.... good for you!!
~ Nicolette
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oh this is good~ lol.
Perfect take on the prompt.
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"your smile,
on parted
lips,
was such a giveaway"
you capture the moment so perfectly in this poem, excellent
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see, i like to be caught....
sometimes. lol
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lol no one likes to be caught?
methinks he did
half the fun is in the chase, I suppose, and some of us run faster than others
lol
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lol
who said it was a him ... hehehe
i am a quick runner too!
thanks for dropping by
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LOL
that actually occured to me as I typed him
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