nicotine eyes...
such beauty that is compelling
the smoke that she hides behind
tells me that she knows im looking
can she see the hunger in my
nicotine eyes....
Author notes
so what do you think????
A contest entry
- Nicotine Eyes by Amaranthine Lover.
300 points, ended November 15, 2007, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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wow, this was random.im going through poems and this pops up.
I like it.
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I like the last two lines, never really thought about the prompt that way, thanks for entering!
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