The moon cascades a fountain of light
Down on my pale and ruddied skin
In love I am with this darkened night
For it treasures and takes me in
And in this beautiful canvas
I stand looking at you
You make my lungs airless
Beating my heart black and blue...
Here lies my stubborn hand of poetry
And here lies my hand for art
Here stands a woman so pretty
And here stands a stupid heart...
Of
Unrequited
Love
Author notes
It's been a long time since my inspiration has been clear enough to write please let me know what you think....
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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The scene it paints for me is beautiful. The passion expressed is reflected by the incredible verbs or adjectives you used. The rhyme was smooth and focused. And once again A piece to admire. Great job, like always
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Impressive
This poem shows how greatly your style has evolved. It has a classic tone in the way it flows yet the wording puts a fresh spin on that classic feel. Great work from a great mind.
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Aw... i really ,really think this is great! Im a bit... lost for words *glug glug* but I know this is a wonder that is well worth a read!! X
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