The smell of the smoke
As it rises in my lungs
The burn in my eyes
As another drag gone
This nicotine drives
These nicotine eyes
A contest entry
- Nicotine Eyes by amaranthine lover.
300 points, ended November 15, 2007, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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I like it good job
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the last two lines had a nice rhythm about it thanks for entering
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I like.....great job.
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