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Sun Haiku

Sunshine is leaving,
And in its wake, herding
Home little children.

A contest entry

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  • lucy sky-diamond
    November 10, 2007

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    short but sweet, a well structure haiku
    a little cliche maybe, but a very nice little poem
    thank you for having entered

    lucy


  • DogFish silver member
    November 2, 2007
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    I like!