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One Last Tear

It's so hard to say goodbye.
We've wasted so much time,
And it's come down to this.

We could have been perfect friends,
Telling of how our days have been,
But I wouldn't know such bliss.

We could have hated each other,
Dreaming of exchanging a shudder,
And playing evil little tricks.

But we can no longer be in love,
For we differ a little too much.
I will not need to taste your kiss.

Years of trying have gone away,
And I no longer want this pain.
Ao one last tear shall now drip.

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  • HaleyMary
    October 30, 2007

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    This was beautiful. Such powerful emotion expressed in this piece. It made me think of how hard it can be to say goodbye to someone and to let them go when a person can still love them so much. Keep writing.


  • yourhot21
    October 30, 2007

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    Wow! This was awesome. The rhyming was very good. All your poems are awesome. I'm hosting a contest with lots of options, so you could enter some of these. Best wishes!


  • midnight eyes
    October 30, 2007
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    This was very good and full of emotion keep up the great work.



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