Waiting dearly for her edge
Edge me dear
I'm waiting
Edge me dear
I need it
Another stab or cut
Please
Tell me dear
Its alright
I'm alright I say
I never needed you
I need to take myself alone
Step back, and I will
Too
Tell me what its like to live
For I KNOW I'm dead
Inside
Tell me what its like to feel
Cause I can't feel
A thing
I'm dead, remember?
Make me right
Make me tight
Every night, please
Make me feel like I'm okay
Cause I can't feel a thing
Remember?
Too much time to walk
Alone
By myself,
My mind really hurts
My heart aches with
That ache for her
Tell her that I'm fine
Again
Please
Dearest
Maiden
Dearest
Friend
My
Only
friEND
Author notes
This is what I get for actually going and reading other peoples poetry. Thanks, "suup jordan", I fail at trying to incorporate and build upon your style.
Please tell me what you think
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this is very special in its writing. The way that you don't finish the sentences, but then the last finishing words are in the next line, making it seem so epic. That's very smartly done!
I relate to some parts of this, feeling like you aren't quite living - I think most of us can. Very well written, full of emotions and thoughts! Good job!
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