Her lips curved
a riddiculous bubble of laughter frothed from her open lips
I had the slight inclination to vomit
as I always do while in her presence
and she
well she is
the other one
Being near her
feeling the cold..as she sucks life
from you
Nothing, she feels nothing
and it's nothing
that she'll give you
You have a deliscious look of adoration
affection
Bile rises
I bite it back
You say "I,do"
The floor of the chapel has had better days.
A contest entry
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Cool write!
Thank you for adding this into the contest!
I wish you the best of luck! -
oooo nice! Jealousy at its very best! well done!
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haha this was great! I could really feel the hatred emanating from your words and I loved the surprise ending! Well done, good luck for the contest!
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