golden soft silk of the pure of creation
ballet to breeze, in may's celebration
fairest of fairies, in tease she seduces
birds which feed twitters to mesmerized muses
ballet to breeze, in may's celebration
crystal blue eyes in their lovable gazes
golden soft silk of the pure of creation
white tender wings drape to ribbon and laces
fairest of fairies, in tease she seduces
fragrant the ring of the flowers adoring
birds which feed twitters to mesmerized muses
pristine sweet dove in her gentle exploring
white tender wings drape to ribbon and laces
crystal blue eyes in their lovable gazes
fragrant the ring of the flowers adoring
pristine sweet dove in her gentle exploring
Author notes
Art: Innocence by Nene Thomas
Love is a Battlefield
A contest entry
- FARIES and other fun. Please enter by LadyKate.
400 points, ended November 25, 2007, 13 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I'm sure there is a term for this form of poetry with repeated lines, but my brain can't dredge it up right now. Lovely images as usual...
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Fairies have always been one of my favorites fantasies. You painted an exquistite pictures of them in all their glory with your words. Loved the repetition of the lines and their arrangement in this sweet verse. Good luck in the contest.
Sincerely,
Leo Long
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Sweet
You have been winkled!
I like the lilting rhythm that dances in these lines, and the images are sweet and tantalizing. The repetitions remind me of some French forms, but you have modified them for your own lovely use. What a pleasure to find this today, thank you Ron, and you Myra.
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Exquisite! Beautifully crafted!!
Thank you for the amazing tapestry ever so eloquent the wonder is magical, mystical the imagery becomes vibrant as your skill takes and creates a vision in words Certainly, we all shall succumb to the beauty you have created here
Wishing you much success in all of your endeavors
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