Existence explodes as I awaken
My head feels like its taken
Fire burns in my gut
Tonight I get out of the rut
Finally the time has come
We go to dinner and talk some
Then a movie, don't know what about
It is just so she will finally put out
I really don't feel like myself today
But I am looking forward to a great lay
We get out of the movie and go to her place
And pretty soon her sweetness is in my face
My tongue dances as if it was possessed
I pin her to the wall and get her undressed
My mouth is on her neck sucking her life away
Nothing will save her, nothing she can say
My hand crushes her breast as my other goes to her cunt
My moves are violent, deliberate, passionate, and blunt
Her moans are lost to me, I cant hear her pleas
Soon I am in her mouth as i put her on her knees
Passion streaming down her face
It feels good fast like it is a race
And ecstasy explodes right down her throat
I lay her down and take off my coat
I line up behind her and I crash inside
Nothing left to say, nothing to hide
I pump her fast and with all my power
Enjoying her whelps and moans for an hour
I want more, something I have not done before
She moans "harder, faster, treat me like a whore"
I pull on her hair to collide with incredible force
She pleads and moans as we scream ourselves hoarse
This isn't me, it is just completely not right
Yet out union feels great, hot, and tight
She pleads as she consumes my thumb
We start to feel our bodies go numb
Then all existence goes bright and white
Our screams reach the heavens we see a light
Then we crash down having killed the urge
We feel how our essences mingle and merge
Trapped in each others arms the sin is consumed
It is then when reason and rationality is resumed
"How the hell did we end up like this?"
"Why did we let ourselves be taken by bliss"
Across the room a dark reply is said
As two figures come out of each head
The shake off the feeling and regain their breath
That is if they had any, since they are in death
"The answer to that is all in a days work"
"It was hard to get it done with such a dork"
"Took the two of us to tempted them to perdition"
"I am glad that I went ahead and made the petition"
"Don't mind partnering up as long as the job gets done
Besides this isn't just work, its a hell of fun"
"And man was it a good and exhilarating lay
Just all part of a demons normal day"
Author notes
I went with 1 and 3
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I liked it
my first impression is very good. I could actually see the image.


