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Freely Given

Freely Given
By: girlish
9/21/2007

Your presence has aroused my sensory button,
filling my veins with hot blood like venom.
My womanhood is awaken by your words, your touch,
my breasts is swollen like a hot air balloon.
Awaiting for your release to set them free,
your gentle hands softly caress me.
Causing me to jump and twitch,
passion flows so freely.
The aroma of lust fills the room,
our tender lips meet.
You move my hair away from my face,
your succulent lips explore my body.
Driving me wild to a world of no inhibitions,
I become your fantasy and you become mine.
Two hearts beat as one,
rhythm swaying as if dancing on a dance floor,
sway until the last song is played.

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point out grammar usage please

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