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Broken

No Thoughts
No Feelings
She lies waiting for the moment to come
She tries to breathe but the sadness overcomes her
So vast the darkness seems as it consumes every inch of her being

So fragile she seems to the world
Blending into the crowd like a star in the moonlight sky
No Love
No savior to the one who has fallen so far

No more tears to shed
Life seems to pass her by
A glimpse of the life shes had
She slowly closes her eyes

So much pain but so few words
How much longer can she survive
Wishing the pain would subside
A message she decides too send
So beautiful but so broken
She puts all her sorrows to an end

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  • JeannieD Hunter gold member
    November 10, 2007

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    Welcome To AllPoetry

    Very beautifully written. Most people can relate to the feelings you have described in this poem. Well done AP is pleased to have you here and we all hope you enjoy the site.

    JeannieD


  • BlackBloodyRose
    October 30, 2007

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    wow this is amazing. i love the last 2 lines. this is etremly powerful and shows alot of emotion. GOOD JOB