No Thoughts
No Feelings
She lies waiting for the moment to come
She tries to breathe but the sadness overcomes her
So vast the darkness seems as it consumes every inch of her being
So fragile she seems to the world
Blending into the crowd like a star in the moonlight sky
No Love
No savior to the one who has fallen so far
No more tears to shed
Life seems to pass her by
A glimpse of the life shes had
She slowly closes her eyes
So much pain but so few words
How much longer can she survive
Wishing the pain would subside
A message she decides too send
So beautiful but so broken
She puts all her sorrows to an end
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Very beautifully written. Most people can relate to the feelings you have described in this poem. Well done
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JeannieD
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wow this is amazing. i love the last 2 lines. this is etremly powerful and shows alot of emotion. GOOD JOB


