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one glance

In a strangers eyes

I met my soul

For the first time

I am found

A contest entry

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  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    October 31, 2007

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    This is quite beautiful and sincerely expressive in so few words. Thanks ever so much for sharing... x Love and light, ButterflySecrets.


  • PassionsPromise gold member
    October 30, 2007

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    hmm trying to figrue out how the kiss fit in lol...you kissed a stranger???
    Great job here
    best of luck
    Tory


  • PageTurner
    October 30, 2007

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    Awww, I got that warm and fuzzy feeling

    Beautiful, Poet!

    ~ Nicky♥

    P.S. you have 14 words, isn't it 'pose to be 15?