I only see one man in my eyes,
lovely perfection to the bland.
A sullen look of displeasure,
nothing like danger to scare.
Jump of the cliffs and rattle his brain,
hear words angry and sad.
Blood gushing in the happiness,
but his voice just melts it away.
Shimmering lights of gleam and wisdom,
years overcome by the genorous consiqueses.
Bone breaking power and crumbling face,
body wise but heart bleeding.
Creepy smiles that cause the wind to blow,
fantasy rides and dangers all around.
I weak and fraile with no one to see,
a beast that wants you.
Just bite me.
Author notes
Option 1!!!!
Twilight or New Moon or Eclipse
By: Stephenie Meyer
All of the books are about a girl, Bella, who moved to Fork, WA and fell in love with a vampire. It is such a gripping story, i totally recommend it.
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Comments
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Good! But you need to tell me what book it's about! I don't mean to be harsh --- but it's the rules! It kept me reading though!
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I LOVE IT!!!! THIS IS TOTALLY FREAKING GREAT!!! Definitly a finalist!!! GREAT JOB!!!! Totally awesome! Good luck in my contest.
-Erin Lynn -
Woah, I love the dark feel. I think that the second stanza is the best. I love the ending. Nothing sounds forced or out of place. Nice!
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