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Winning stroke

I may look lean
but very  well green
and  my desires are so strong
and will surely commit no wrong
Believe me I am yours
let us be 'love' winners

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  • michichoeret
    October 30, 2007
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    nice

    but have problem with the "lean". turns me off sorry