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postcards

I値l send you postcards from foreign islands
Which I値l refer to as home for little while,
And bring back cigarettes and whiskey
To celebrate being in your arms again.
We値l drink until we池e dry, and dance
Like light on dark waters.
The turbulence of our humanity will fade,
And for split seconds,
Only freedom and desire
Running as wild as rivers through broken soil.

Let痴 not call this place home
Until our bodies form a coil in this bed.

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Maybe it's time to bask in the passion absence brings.

Let me know.

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  • AC no1
    October 30, 2007

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    amazing

    i love this, ever the wordsmith.
    You have created such beautiful images within these words.
    Perhaps you'd like to exlain for me
    I love you
    -x-


  • leander gold member
    October 30, 2007
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    'To dance like light on dark waters' is a very beautiful image that you have painted upon my eyes actually

    I really like the feelings you've embedded here. The ones of being away from home and looking forward to be there again, together with the one you share so many things with.

    Good imagery and metaphors
    Leander