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Wonders of Life

Ethereal consciousness

illuminating
      our visions

enchanted precision
        of promises dreamt

Minute wonderment
    by
        compassionate
                    souls


Author notes

PROMPT: 15 words

~Take pleasure in the details~

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  • Malabu
    October 31, 2007

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    a smile reflecting

    yes yes...in a moments time one can dream a lifetime...in anticipations of what may come...there is nothing more wonderful than a strangers eye...watching a smile break...nor the look of a lover...smiling upon you....wonderful write this is...
    Mal


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    October 31, 2007

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    So detailed and expressive. Thanks ever so much for sharing... x Love and light, ButterflySecrets.


  • Grey Mouser
    October 30, 2007

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    Wonderful feeling to this, makes one glow in the grace of this perfect smile. Best to you in the contest sis.

    Mouser


  • PassionsPromise gold member
    October 30, 2007

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    awww well indeed this one rocks the house !! great job and best wishes to you in the contest.
    tory


  • PageTurner
    October 30, 2007

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    I took Pleasure in your details!

    I'm Smiling, Poet!

    ~ Nicky♥


  • crimsondew
    October 30, 2007

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    wow

    beautiful...Mine is so plain in front of this....
    All the best!

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