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Shoot

Lips curled
upward,
stir in soul
birth of joy
shooting out
to reach the world.

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15 words- to smile

In a list

A contest entry

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  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    October 31, 2007

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    It certainly reached me and made me smile. Thanks ever so much for sharing... x Love and light, ButterflySecrets.


  • Mykeee
    October 30, 2007

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    This was cool - I actually caught the ryhme from the first line and last. Well done & good luck ~ Mykeee


  • PassionsPromise gold member
    October 30, 2007

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    and it reached miine. Thanks for the lift.
    best wishes i this contest.
    worthy of win.
    Tory


    • crimsondew
      October 30, 2007
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      I am so glad it reached out and touched someone...Keep up the smile


  • PageTurner
    October 30, 2007

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    Your very moving and sincere thoughts,
    came to life for me...

    I Thank You, Scribe!

    ~ Nicky♥

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    October 30, 2007

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    This is sweet.Thank you for sharing this with me goodluck to you in the contest.Best wishes and much love

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