Whispers
In words of love,
In your ears beautiful,
I send often yearning for you
In love!
When invisible
To my naked eye ,for long,
My longing increase
With thoughts of you ,in mind
As stars in night sky,galore!
Your love drains me like rain,
Your beauty with grace
And your words musical
On me work like magic!
By the sea,we walk at sunset,
Luke warm sand under our bare feet,
Holding each other close with arms,
Beholding rising waves with glee!
Author notes
To walk together all lovers like the most in love!
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beautiful words flowing from your tender pen...to be in love is so perfect and to walk upon the sandy beaches sharing the two hearts that are softly becoming one...thank you so much for sharing your words with me
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very beautiful
i loved this poem
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BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!
Ceegees this is absolutly beautiful! I love it!!
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Ceegee, this is a beautiful poem and describes the love of a man for a woman from the heart. To walk at sunset on a beach with the one you love is magical. Your images bring such a place to my mind, I can feel the warm sand beneath my feet and hear the sound of the sea, it's wonderful.
Thank you for taking me there.
Love and kisses
Sue
xxx
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Ahh yet another beautifully worded piece of poetic art. It borders on sensuality and is perfectly romantic. I could see myself on a beach walking and enjoying the company of someone special.....well written..novy
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Very lovely poem Shankar.
To walk with the one you love is a wonderful feeling that everyone should experience.
I like you poem very much, I know it's been written from your heart as you are a very caring soul.
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I like this write. YOu have great description!!! You explain your emotion well too.!!! Keep up the good work and feel free to check out my page anytime!!
Jess
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