To beam the perfect rouge figures that flutter across
That is to love your smile
A contest entry
- To smile.... by Lavender Butterfly.
450 points, ended October 31, 2007, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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So short... and yet so good. Sometimes really super short poetry.... is just very good. Especially if good words are used! Great choice of words, and description, it was a very vivid description for the length of the poem!!! GREAT job!!!
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If I could I would give you more stars for your comment coz this is one of those poems I wrote coz I was bored and wanted to enter a competition just because I could really. Thanks so much, you are really encouraging
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So sweetly and beautifully expressed. Thanks ever so much for sharing... x Love and light, ButterflySecrets.
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sweet straight up.
Innocent straight forward.
I liekd it
best wishes to you in the contest
Tory
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Thank you
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