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The Return of Her Marine

Brown eyes

Smiling excitedly

Glimpse...

Handsome Blues

Longing eyes

Warm embrace

Unceasing love

Chapel bound

A contest entry

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  • Griswold
    November 25, 2007

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    Nicely written, short and sweet. From meeting to chapel in so few words, nice job, best of luck...Scott


  • DrunkenRam
    November 18, 2007

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    Guilty ( Everybody's guilty)

    I really liked this write, it reminded me of when I came home, it was one of the finalists in the contest.
    hope to see you in the next one.


  • DrunkenRam
    November 13, 2007
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    Guilty ( Everybody"s Guilty)

    Thanks for entering my contest< I will be commenting when it is over. Good Luck!

  • Judith Chandler
    November 11, 2007
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    very nice

    I like romance and I hope they live happily ever after.


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    October 31, 2007

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    You've captured such emotion in so few words. Thanks ever so much for sharing... x Love and light, ButterflySecrets.


  • PassionsPromise gold member
    October 30, 2007

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    woohooo there ya have a show of emotin an d powerful devotion hell yea.
    Great job and best wishes

    Tory


  • PageTurner
    October 30, 2007

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    That definitely brought a Smile to my face!

    Delightful, Poet!

    ~ Nicky♥

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