My senses tingle to your touch
caresses so divine
as heartbeats pulse in unison
forever we're entwined.
Whispered words of true devotion
as we join in ecstacy
this universe is only ours
there is nothing more we see.
Each night to paradise we go
and between us desire purely flows.
Author notes
Prompt - Passion (50 words or less)
A contest entry
- Passion: 50 words or less by Lj-.
300 points, ended November 8, 2007, 8 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Nice write.
Thank you for entering,
Best of luck.
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Sometimes we don't need the glitz and glamour we put into passionate writes, you have captured all within these words.... wonderful
Karen
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simply expressed. loving wholesome passion .lovely .good luck gaylene xx ppg
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Beautifully penned !
This is a wonderful write. Few words, but so much said. Well done and good luck in this contest
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Ohhhh nicely penned soft, delicate and so very sensual. Beautiful! well done and good luck sis. This is really lovely to read.
Shaz xx
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wow this is an awsome write which really digs deep within the prompt and gives it an awsome affect well done gran and best of luck
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