a dewdrop on silk
flowers in dawn's
rose smile
reflects
curious emerald eyes
questioning child
A contest entry
- To smile.... by Lavender Butterfly.
450 points, ended October 31, 2007, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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dawns rose smile - dawn's rose smile as rose smile is belonging to the dawn
a good short piece here, it works well and has strength
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Thanks for the comment. Those apostrophes always seem to slip right off the paper, thanks for making me aware of it.
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This certainly would give someone something to smile abut. Liked your interpretation of the theme of this contest.
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So creative and detailed giving off such wonderful imagery. Thanks ever so much for sharing... x Love and light, ButterflySecrets.
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This was indeed a precious piece. great job and best wishes toyou in this contest
tory
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