Tiny little thoughtful things
that tell me who you are
whisper to my heart...him.
A contest entry
- To smile.... by Lavender Butterfly.
450 points, ended October 31, 2007, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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..psst...
*whispered*
The beauty of this is as the beauty in a tiny sculpture rendered in miniature. Tiny, cute, simple, truth.
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This is relly very beautiful I enjoyed this cute little ditty well done!
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Although your words are sparse, there's certainly great depth of meaning in what you had to say here. Good luck in your contest.
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This is so delicate and lovely. A pleasure to read. Thanks ever so much for sharing... x Love and light, ButterflySecrets.
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aww the beauty pours from this piece.
great job and best wishes to you in this contest.
tory -
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thanks, I love the little short contests...
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Made me Smile!
Pleasurable, Poet.
P.S. You missed a "t" in thoughtful.
~ Nicky♥
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thanks for catching that...
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