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You're so hard to Give up

I tried not to like you anymore
Those pritsy little girls flirting with you
What chance do i have?
I liked you since i was 11
You showed signs of interest
But you do that to everyone, don't you?

I love your built.
I love your voice.
But most of all,
I LOVE YOUR TALENTS AND HOW YOU CARRY YOURSELF.

You're so hard to give up
Everyone likes you, don't they?
Tried to get your attention loads of times..
HA! what the hell am i thinking?

But you're so hard to give up.
I HATE IT WHEN YOU IGNORE ME.
I HATE IT WHEN YOU TALK TO THE OTHER GIRLS.
I HATE IT WHEN I DON'T DO SOMETHING.

Least to say, I LIKE YOU.
But the real question is if you do, me.
What does it take to get your attention?
YOU ARE SO DARN HARD TO GIVE UP!

But hell, i'll just keep trying

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  • Blooming Poet
    February 8, 2008

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    its hard to give some one up even if its for the better. Its even harder when you really care for them. I know.


  • Entwining Beauty
    November 25, 2007
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    beautiful giid luck


  • ThatONEweirdChick
    November 19, 2007

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    Very nice . It's just so full of raw emotion. It's truely hard to tell if someone really likes you when they show that sort of attention to a lot of people. Makes me want to hurt them feeling. Good luck in the contest.

  • Entwining Beauty
    November 16, 2007

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    Do not reveal yourself thank you :)

    I say shout it at him let him know just kiss him see what his reaction is hee, beautiful poem good luck in my contest


  • only1love4ever
    November 8, 2007

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    Awesome, this is so sincere. You are very creative. Very nice, Thank you for entering and best of luck to you as well!!


  • transit
    November 3, 2007

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    wow!

    I could relate so very well and this was definitely an emotional piece. we all hate this feeling. hate how they make ys feel so good yet we can never have them. so true. the descriptions here are beautiful and I found myself smiling to myself.

    but mine was much befor 11 and it's a bit different yet the feelings are the same. hope you feel better and this will pass. try to help him. maybe ask his problems and stuff then things won't be so awkward and before you know it, you'll be friends for life. even after you get married and stuff, you can look back and talk about all the times. if it doesn't work out, just be a friend. it will be really sweet that way. best of wishes in the contest!


  • checkmate
    October 30, 2007

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    wow. I loved the whole lot of emotion you poured into this piece. there is angst in your lines too, and your love is strong. oh- I am sure you will get him one day, you are just too special to miss dear

    I like the caps, but it's better if you work without them But oh my, other than that, this was a great piece of poetry.

    I love the ending line. I felt exactly the same way when I had a crush- that lasted from age 10 to 15 after that, I just got bored!

    this was awesome dear. gee- you are a real poet gal!! keep rocking on, and keep writing--- I promise I'll read each one


  • Beauty Of Silence
    October 30, 2007

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    YEA WEE! that's the spirit! keep trying! You'll get him one day... soon! sooner than you know!

    You like a guy huh...(duh!) This was a very nice poem! i liked the way you inserted aps on some words! it shows that they have more importance and greater details! BRAVO!

    This poem showed the way u liked him and stuff! wee! u r talented! this was a very nice one! way better than my first few! keep writing!

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