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Look within the
petals, where they fade -
the polen sleeps
for a bee to arrive.
A contest entry
- To smile.... by Lavender Butterfly.
450 points, ended October 31, 2007, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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I like the picture I can see in your words. The picture you posted is gone, but your words take care of that.
little sam
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a good poem, aye all in good time i think of here, as nature gives so nature takes in another way, and so the cycle of life continues
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Beautifully unique and certainly picturesque. Thanks ever so much for sharing... x Love and light, ButterflySecrets.
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This is beautiful and it definitely made me smile because of the images and right now, when winter is coming it is comforting to see and have a poem about a beautiful flower and a bee! Good luck in the contest!
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aww unique this one was. I didnt think of it that way.
great job and best wishes to you in the contest.
Tory -
Picturesque and penetrating penning, Poet!
~ Nicky♥
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So pretty...Did make me smile...All the best!
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Your poem is so calm; peaceful as the flower itself. I loved the simple beauty.
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very good insight...
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Thanks a lot.
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