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Within The Flurry Of Moments








    Intricate insignias,
    traced inside

      the palm
      of tomorrow's
      creation,

    a flitter
    of lashes

      painting me.









A contest entry

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  • Malabu
    October 31, 2007
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    Lovely

    flap of the lids on this...congrates on this wonderful piece...


  • Lavender Butterfly silver member
    October 31, 2007

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    Stunning as usual ~ Thanks sop very much for this beautifully creative entry... x Love and light, ButterflySecrets.


  • PassionsPromise gold member
    October 30, 2007
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    awe this was a baeautiful entry. it spoke sweetly.best wishes to you in this contest.
    bravo
    Tory


  • F a t i m a
    October 30, 2007
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    stellar-brilliant-simply exquisite piece!
    good luck for the contest!


  • SugarCandyKittyKat
    October 30, 2007
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    Clever imagery!!


  • crimsondew
    October 30, 2007
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    Wonderful as always..All the best!


  • butterflywriter
    October 30, 2007
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    excellent...

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