I hear his verse
played on velvet cloth
signing heaven
in every shade of sleep
rocking me
on satin wings
that lift with summer's breeze...
Unbuttoning the sound
of silence..........
Author notes
The Sound of a Dream
A contest entry
- Promt Contest 10 enteries/30 words or less by mysticstorm.
475 points, ended October 31, 2007, 16 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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This is lovely. I am left with feeling of serene softness.
'unbuttoning the sound
of silence'
those lines are brilliant. Enjoyed!
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This is perfectly beautiful. The word choice and ending are perfectly done.
Sweet soft flow of metaphor and tranquility.
Thank you for entering! -
This is beautiful. The word choice was lovely and unique. I have nothing critical to offer. Best wishes in the contest and God bless.
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There's so much to see and savor here but I think the last line stands out as the most powerful image and thought of all. I like what you have written here. Good luck in your contest.
JLG -
Thanks, Joe, for sending me the link to this beautiful
poem...and yes, it is very lovely...I love the last line..."unbuttoning the sound of silence." Perfect...
Love, Lane
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Nice
I agree with Willow, that is fantastic.
Joe
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Unbuttoning the sound
of silence..........
that is just utterly fantastic. you've really captured it. great job (as usual)
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