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Tortured Peace Nightmare (Abstract)



closed eyes dream

open mined


       salted

 


    deserted beach wears

 

 

elusive dove’s screams I ride into clouds

 



inside

   snapping bones

       labored breaths

 

 

burning feathers

        falling

             me

 


           sand tastes like

                       chicken 

                                          apologizing





















 

Author notes

Promt: The Sound of a Dream
30 words
ABSTRACT THINKING

yes: MINED was intentional

picture by Rene Margritte found at www.art.com

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  • mysticstorm gold member
    October 31, 2007

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    This is amazing! So deep and creative. Lovely metaphor...how strange it must have been for you to taste the chicken. lol
    Kidding.
    Love this!

    Thank you for entering!


    • Tam
      October 31, 2007
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      LOL...chicken.....ROFLMAO!!!


  • Grey Mouser
    October 30, 2007
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    ok so wheres the applause LOL

  • Grey Mouser
    October 30, 2007

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    WOW, this is just simply amazing. Your muse is so wonderful to behold when you craft such magnificent illusions for the senses to inhale. Absorbing the wonder that you gift us. Best to you in the contest.
    Mouser