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Unheard sound

From office window over the green
I hear the sea rolling its message to me.

Its blue haze in morning sun
stretches with lift’s air to horizon’s bright
letting me know God’s magnificent create.

My soul replicates her gentle splash
against rocks where she delicately lingers, then
withdraws with unheard sound.

Today my God will do the same
and also linger by my name…

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  • rite
    February 5, 2008

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    The magic of the ocean I know well; its soothing, calm rhythm and days of raging fury, its saline fragrance and kaleidoscope of hues. The rushing in and receding of the great waters that shapes and feeds the land on which we live. Its crystal clearness that allows our sight to capture the colorful beauty of the coral reefs, abruptly followed by a deep shade of black of an ocean trench when sailing away from the shores, while the palm trees wave a graceful goodbye in the teasing wind. This overwhelming magic reflects the playful and creative side of The Light. An infinite power from where we originate as well. We will never leave HIS heart. Thank you for creating and sharing, for bringing back memories I cherish respectfully. Take care,

    Chris


    • FransB gold member
      February 5, 2008
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      Chris

      I so enjoyed your reply. It was a journey in itself and through your expression you have given life to my poem. Thank you. Frans


  • leo2
    November 5, 2007

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    If only we listen that little voice delivers the best message of all. You like me see God in all things. Best wishes in the contest.

    Sincerely,
    Leo Long


  • penman gold member
    October 31, 2007
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    Wonderful

    Very well done. Nice flow of feeling and great spriitual quality. Best of luck in the contest.


  • myrataal silver member
    October 30, 2007

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    A wonderful ...

    auditive poem with gentleness and intuitive perceptions, forming beautiful poetry from personified awarenesses.

    I simply loved the silent knowing of the last lines. God often keeps a loving eye on his creatures, and He knows best the unheard sounds of our souls.

    Be well, Poet.
    Love
    Myra


  • duana
    October 30, 2007

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    wow this needs to be cross stitched and put in a frame along with this border you have. Do you know hoe to do that? Seriously, this is really good.

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