The sibilance of my name.
Exhaled in heat.
Sends ripples of expectation
down the base of my spine.
Where the warmth of the tone
spreads along my essence.
Author notes
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A contest entry
- INVITE ONLY...FOR MY FAVORITES OR ANYONE WHO H AS ME ON THEIR FAVORITE'S... BEFORE TODAY by mysticstorm.
450 points, ended December 12, 2007, 5 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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thanks love for the HM... i've been a writing fool lately... but alas... back to work i must head! LOL... I soo enjoy these little prompts and quickie contests of yours..and i have to tell you they've made me a better writer...
and 
... thank you sweetheart...desi
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Beautiful metaphor, that reads like a sensual write of love.
Wonderful work.
Thank you for entering!
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