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very (abstract, specific)

minds produce words about things.
humans describe relationships and people.
people gossip about who's bad.
he told me her story.
Joe said Sara slept around.
"Did she really screw him?"

A contest entry

5 words each line. Same topic, from abstract to specific. Whatdja think?

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  • Jai Guru Deva
    January 26, 2008

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    This had NOTHING to do with my contest. It's too short and meaningless to be considered a "poem" and frankly this wasted my time.

    Good luck.

  • mysticstorm gold member
    October 31, 2007

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    Very deep and creative. Great metaphor and very interesting.
    Very wonderfully done!

    Thank you for entering!