minds produce words about things.
humans describe relationships and people.
people gossip about who's bad.
he told me her story.
Joe said Sara slept around.
"Did she really screw him?"
A contest entry
- Promt Contest 10 enteries/30 words or less by mysticstorm.
475 points, ended October 31, 2007, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Things we lost in the fire... by Jai Guru Deva.
500 points, ended January 26, 2008, 85 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
5 words each line. Same topic, from abstract to specific. Whatdja think?
Comments
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This had NOTHING to do with my contest. It's too short and meaningless to be considered a "poem" and frankly this wasted my time.
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you obviously didn't get it----read it again1
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Very deep and creative. Great metaphor and very interesting.
Very wonderfully done!
Thank you for entering!
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