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Hate You More

Seeing you there burns me inside
Taking on the life of my past
Watch as you once hurt me
And now I go on to another
Abuse and hurt me tonight

Somehow you are just unclean
Told me you were the chosen
Lies of being Jesus
My dear I've slept with Lucifer

Beaten and bruised
You've never done this to me
Bloodied and battered
These girls hurt me more
And still I hate you more

Watch them bring me down
Further than you ever could
When I pushed you away
I bring them closer to me
Just because I hate you more

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  • Celticmoon
    November 26, 2007
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    Thank you for entering and good luck!


  • sensualbutterfly
    October 30, 2007
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    Such pain in your words. Hope you find happiness soon! Great write. Enjoyed reading it.