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Flash
              white


bright against the black.

A face remembered
in dreams before.


And again,

            flash
                   
red;

dread spreads,

hidden somewhere
within silence

~ screams reverberate ~

must I always be afraid?








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Promt: The Sound of a Dream

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  • mysticstorm gold member
    October 31, 2007

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    Very deep and sad. Makes one feel as if they must live it the rest of their life's.
    Wonderful metaphor.

    Thank you for entering!


  • Pamela A Lamppa silver member
    October 30, 2007

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    Oh my. This made me feel so sad. Beautifully written. Filled with strong emotion. Well done. ~Pamela