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Quiet Misrepresentation

Fragmenting visions unfurl snapping taut,
windblown chimes that reverberate in silent corridors.
changing percepted patterns of familiarity
into geysered blasts of timely disruption,
fading into echoes of the wakings worries.

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prompt - The Sound of a Dream

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  • mysticstorm gold member
    October 31, 2007

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    Lovely wqord choice and metaphor.
    Deep and thought provking, the sound of a dream in many colors.

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