Choirs of angels singing hymns
The powerful ocean tide breaking
Fresh snow falling upon mountaintops
Hundreds of galaxies forming above
Winds sighing as they blow
Feather falling onto the ground
Author notes
Prompt: The Sound Of A Dream
30 Words Or Less
A contest entry
- Promt Contest 10 enteries/30 words or less by mysticstorm.
475 points, ended October 31, 2007, 16 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Gold from Green #3 by Grey Mouser.
300 points, ended November 3, 2007, 6 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Friends, I appreciate your comments and review on this write. However, please do not add my name to your comments due to the contest rules. Thank you very much!
Comments
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Ahh, quite the sublime feel to it and a most wonderful expression of a blissful dream. Thanks for entering into the contest.
Be well and be blesseed,
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Beautiful imagery and some of the most wonderful sounds for a dream. I do believe I may never wish to wake from this one.
Excellent!
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What a wonderful dream that produces these sweet sounds. I can almost hear it. Well done with the prompt. Very soothing. Thank you for sharing. Good luck in the contest.
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very tenderly written and I enjoyed this very much. Sweet dreams ~blessings to you always~ Excellent take on the prompt, and best to you in contest
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Beautiful imagery, looks like you are partly hastening Christmas....all these elements of nature in their beauty are colliding in this poem in such gentle ways.....Lovely write
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This was a sweet piece you penned here Jer.
Great job and best of luck to you.
Tory
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excellent
Wonderful take on the prompt. Best of luck in the contest.
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