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The Sound of a Dream

The sound of a dream
can be 'o so sweet,
or sharp as razors
slicing with ease.

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  • Amunet Wolfbane Moderators member
    April 1, 2008

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    This is an interesting piece. I usually don't go for the cutting aspect of things myself but I do find this creatively done and speaks volumnes. It intrigues me. I would leave it as is.


  • mysticstorm gold member
    October 31, 2007

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    How true it is. Dreams do come in each extreme, only problem is we can not chose the ones we wish to have.
    Love the metaphor and imagery.

    Thank you for entering!


  • Jeremy0826 silver member
    October 29, 2007
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    So true! Well done and good luck
    to you with it here!




    Jeremy0826


  • FindingFaith
    October 29, 2007
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    Not sure but I think it was free verse only.