Serenading encouragement
leaving notes in soul.
Death mask
discarded
for feathers.
Exhaled gratitude
feels dulcet tones
when eyes wrote
hopes song
giving other's dreams
reality's music.
Author notes
Prompt - The Sound of a Dream
A contest entry
- Promt Contest 10 enteries/30 words or less by mysticstorm.
475 points, ended October 31, 2007, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Nicely done. Love the metaphor and reference to music.
Nicely done.
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This is wonderful in rhythm and the words are perfect for the prompt--great poem! Good luck in the contest!
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Thank you for the wonderful comment.
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I like "death mask discarded to feathers" and "eyes wrote hopes song"
good luck
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Thank you for the wonderful comment.
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Wonderful!!
Powerfully presented Sweetness
Love the words You have brought forth
Love the line:
leaving notes in soul
Thank You for sharing Your Talent!
Keep that quill dancing~~
Many blessings to You in the contest
Best wishes too
and my Love
~ Desire~*~
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Thank you darling for the sweet and touching words. Love you for all you say and do.
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You write with such conviction!!
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Thank you for the wonderful comment.
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This is a wonderful take on the prompt
my friend! Great work as always and
best of luck to you with it in this
contest!
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Thank you for the wonderful comment.
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