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The hand that fed us.

You shutter

and
          be
It can        horrible to see

              in
the cracks      his hands bleed
but
                they
the creation        produce
has
put food    this table
          on

Author notes

I tried to make a hand laying on its side. The knobs in the line are the knuckles, and I tried to make them very common words to accent the ordinariness of hands, but oh so crucial for the entire family. Tell me if you see it.

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  • NSYancey
    October 31, 2007
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    this is amazing.
    End of discussion.