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Sleeping Baby

Sleeping baby,
Sleep away the day,
Sleeping baby,
My baby please lay.

Sleeping baby,
Your eyes so blue,
Sleeping baby if you only new,
Oh how much I love you.

Sleeping baby,
Hold my hand,
Sleeping baby please understand,
How ill never let you go.

I love you sleeping baby,
I wont ever leave,
Sleeping baby dream o fleaves on the trees,
Sleeping baby ill let you lie.

Author notes

Um, My baby brother died un born when i was nine. He would be 4 now. His name was gona be Shon. But he ws never born. I still love him thogh.

Hm? To much random?

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  • At least he never suffered the the sights of this often times ugly world, and never had the misfortune of being hated or hurt by anyone.
    This is a touching sentiment of love for one you never had the chance to meet.
    -cheers


  • im only half empty
    February 17, 2008
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    Aww, this is a cute piece...a little redundant, but since it's a children's poem I suppose it ties great.

    "sleeping baby,
    Sleep away the day.
    Sleeping baby
    My baby please lay."

    Great piece...once again you have a few punctuational errors, but hey I make them too. :


  • SongOfSilence
    February 7, 2008

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    whoa..

    i'm so sorry this write is a beautiful tribute to your brother.. its very sad...

    very beautifully written..

    great job ...


  • Lancea Optimus
    December 1, 2007

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    This poem made me sad and happy at the same time. Your baby brother was born again through the poem. He will live forever as long as there are people to read this.