heavy eyes open
too early for conversation
only arise
for the promise of a real awakening
sip this inky elixir
emanating energy and warmth
one cup gone,
start the day.
A contest entry
- Anything and everything! by My Selfish Romance.
300 points, ended January 26, 2008, 97 entries
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Comments
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Coffee really does start the day! I love how you ve put this ritual into a sweet little poem. very good.
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Loved it, but only 1 cup! I need a little more to begin my day best of luck in the contest!
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haha i know, i usually need more too. just one to start and then definitely more throughout the day! :-)
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I really like this. Well done and thankyou for entering my contest (sorry for not writing much but I have 40 other entries to coment on)
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ha. omg so freaking true. i love how much you can just write. it takes me forever to get something good.
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awh thanks kins!!!!! :-) you're a great writer too!
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