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The Diary

Blank pages,
Screaming to be written on,
Crying ink soiling the pages black,
Needing you.

Wanting its pages to be filled,
All sheets white with blue lines,
cat on the cover,
Unwritten.

Needing someone,
Anyone,
Find it,
Fill its blank pages.

Staring at the pages,
Blank,
Blu and white,
Write.

3 words will due,
It will accept even only 2,
Write in it,
2 words,
The End

Author notes

Im sorry for any misspelledness im only 12 after all. And no lie i just started writeing.

Is it to out there?

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  • lesbian-in-love
    December 10, 2007

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    I actually like this one. I use to keep a diary and every now and then I look back I read through it and find only like a line or two on one page. So this poem was good. Thanks for the read and keep it up. As they say practice makes perfect. Pssst. I make spelling mistakes too.

  • Sky Prince Ireland gold member
    October 30, 2007

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    Not bad for a first time in writing. Just keep at it and you'll get better and better. I don't believe there's any specific way of writing. I believe every person has their own way of doing it and should be respected for that. Thanks for sharing this.
    Brian

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