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{Master}... I am Yours

Bend me -

     Fold me -

 

into the shadows of your heart,

       for I belong only to you.

 

 

Dreams cascade over burning flesh,

     as you arc me to the perfection of your desire.

 

 

Breaths tiptoe over the tightening fibers,

      whilst constricting moans are feverishly exhaled.

            He has mastered touch, for his fingers are delicate

      digits of uttered ecstacy and I am merely his clay.

Limb by limb, devour all that remains of me.

 

 

Bend me -

    Fold me-

 

 

                I will forevermore be yours.

Author notes

For My AP Husband: tomisb

Tom, You are the Master of touch, and I will love you forevermore.




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  • background music
    March 27, 2008

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    Breathtaking

    I am lost for words.... I love the pic. I love the poem. Especially the body of the poem. The metaphores are perfect. I can't compliment this one enough!


    • luckynsincere
      March 27, 2008

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      what a beautiful comment from you Thank you very much for taking the time to leave those words. It made my morning much brighter

      Mel


  • Amunet Wolfbane Moderators member
    March 26, 2008

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    I'm not sure which compelled me more the poem or the author's notes on this one. That line itself is brillant and so full of emotion.


  • leander Moderators member
    March 25, 2008

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    I quite like what you have written here actually the fourth stanza really stood out to me here.

    Great use of imagery inside this one!

    Thank you for the entry!

    Leander


  • Celticmoon
    March 19, 2008

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    To be molded by another's touch through love, and word alone is amazing. To be molded in everyway is phenomenal!
    Thank you for entering,
    best of luck to you!


    Blessings
    Bel


  • Tattboyspet
    October 30, 2007

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    "I am merely his clay." - those words just jumped out at me - loved them!
    thank you for the entry


  • jcat gold member
    October 29, 2007
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    This was just pure erotasism!! Beautifully written.


  • tomisb
    October 29, 2007

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    You fill your words with understanding. The way that touch changes one forever. When we surrender, we are no longer at war with the tao of the path, instead we become ecstatic and clarified by the Light.
    Love, Tom B.

    • luckynsincere
      October 29, 2007
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      And yes I knew you would see the changes caused by that touch. You are so inspirational. I was actually a little saw your poem and was taken by it... Something that seem like "force" or "lust" at first glance can also be breathtaking and loving.

      Thank you again my loving husband

      Mel

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