silent tears
of shattered words.
worlds have crumbled on less.
even the skys condem me
pouring out their sympathy.
the sweat of dispare
and tears of blood
this is what i am.
the world is crumbling around me
because i no longer believe.
love is just as fake as pain.
in casting my defences
i broke all the rules
and my lovers heart.
no one ever asked me for less.
but what i created in reality
there was no room for
in his heart.
all my sence's drip off
splattering into nothingness.
you want what i am?
this is hatred.
and i don't need you
to put me back together.
i am my own.
all that i have left is me.
and the silence that you bring
pains me more than my sins.
but even you have fadded.
i tear myself appart
looking for some shred
of anything.
there is no hope or peace or love
or forgiveness
in what i have made.
i want to go
but i am afraid.
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A contest entry
- Bring it by Stormy Sky.
600 points, ended November 12, 2007, 7 entries
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wow, this is absolutely amazing. I love these lines beacuse they show so much remorse, and your whole poem shows so much care for the OTHER rather than self centeredness. Excellent. (Oh and here are the lines I like: in casting my defences
i broke all the rules
and my lovers heart.)
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wow meg, im worried baby. are you ok, this is realy evil for you, its just for the contest right, it doesnt relait to you right...mikes scared!!!!
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yes. yes it tis just for the contest.
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good
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